Fog: a poem by Rachel Dacus
- Apr 29
- 1 min read

Fog
This morning the treetops emerge
from the marine layer that rolls in at night,
bringing a scent of the sea inland,
misting us as one. I step outside
with my morning cup
on a deck high above the street,
as the light brightens between fingers of a pine,
its curved green needles parting the haze.
At first the sun is tentative, dancing
forward and back, the way I hesitate
to disperse my confining memories,
those imprints of ruin that keep me bound,
though I want to ghost them away.
But the whiteness thins and I see
the pine tree’s form, staying still
in the morning’s transformations
as they reveal true shapes.
The sun breaks through,
gilding us all in loveliness.
Each window across the way
holds the Self looking out,
waving and calling, Look in the mirror.
I do and see a day that’s free of blur,
overspilling in golden love,
and I can only rise into that transparency
of happiness by giving it away.
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Rachel Dacus has published seven novels and four poetry collections, with recent work in Eclectica, Aeolian Harp, Amethyst Review, and in the anthologies Fire and Rain: Ecopoetry
of California and Nūr Mélange: A Ghazal Anthology. She lives in the San Francisco Bay
Area with her architect husband and a Silky Terrier. She writes fiction and volunteers for local causes. More at www.racheldacus.net.
(April 2026 issue)




"The sun breaks through,
gilding us all in loveliness." Beautiful.